On Christmas morning I woke up. Really early I ran down into. The lounge and looked under the Christmas tree and there was nothing under there but a note and I read it said go to the place were your never aloud to look and I said in the bake closet in my room ran back into the hallway I opened it and looked in there and presents fell on me and I screamed with happiness and my brother ran into my room and said "Okay what happen now"
I said "Help me please"
and he she just walked away I called my mum and my dad she came and helped me she said
"Why didn't you call your brother instead"she said
"Nope wait for your birthday like your brothers"said mum"But you can open only one"
she said I said yes thank you so much mum I grabbed this big one and it had a big squishy blanket I said
"Thank you mum and dad"
so he took all of the presents off me and I got up of the ground.
WALHT write an interesting recount I am trying to to add more detail I found it hard because I was trying to remember everything about what happen. Next time I want to remember to add full stops and capitals.
That so nice you woke up on christmas how was it like?
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